The first line of each role is a number
Lead with segment and quota, then attainment. "Enterprise AE, $1.2m annual quota, 118% attained over two years" is the entire first impression. Everything after it is supporting detail.
- Scope line: segment, territory, quota, product type.
- Attainment: percentage and consistency ("112%, 108% and 121% over three years").
- Deal shape: average deal size, cycle length, largest closed.
- Pipeline: outbound sourced, forecast accuracy, or whatever the role was actually judged on.